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I'm empty, hollow, cracked
a fatal flaw, a single blow
shatters the whole thing to pieces

I'm an shallow pool with no water
I'm a ballon with no air
Water flows through me endlessly
But it gives no life

A fire burns
Through my veins
Though it gives no warmth
Arms encircle me
Yet they provide no comfort

A headstone in the dreary rain
A tattered blanket, all in rags
Gray
Like the sky
A baby's cry
She shivers

The heavens open
And rain falls
Droplets turn to bullets
Leaving my skin icy and pale
I shiver

She cries more
Her tears mingle with the rain
Her screams with the thunder
Reaching for her baby

Can't open her eyes to find her mother
Lightning crashes as they scream
Arms outstretched at nothing they can reach
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I guess this could technically be called Nightmare2....because it's inspired by a dream I had last night.......and one I am afraid I'll have again...

Emptiness is loneliness
And loneliness is cleanliness
And cleanliness is godliness
And God is empty
Just like me...
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Mood: Dumbfounded !ashie39 Apr 2, 2011   Writer
Wow. this is good
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~PrincessBlackRose Apr 2, 2011  Student Writer
thanks~
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~LonelyGirl10 Apr 2, 2011  Student Writer
this is just amazing. true beauty and inspiration can come out of the most terrifying and startling things.
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~PrincessBlackRose Apr 2, 2011  Student Writer
thanks Allie :)
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~LonelyGirl10 Apr 2, 2011  Student Writer
no problem~ :heart: i love how we both made our best friends get accounts.
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~PrincessBlackRose Apr 2, 2011  Student Writer
I know right? lol.
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~LonelyGirl10 Apr 2, 2011  Student Writer
haha. so hows ny?
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~PrincessBlackRose Apr 2, 2011  Student Writer
cold. :snow:
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~LonelyGirl10 Apr 3, 2011  Student Writer
that sucks. nj is cold too but we had a day a week or two ago where i was wearing shorts. i want spring!
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~PrincessBlackRose Apr 3, 2011  Student Writer
I had on a T-shirt and I was outside and life was good. Then the cold came....haha Taylor Swift play on words xD
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