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Glassy red eyes darting everywhere
Can't stay on one subject
Not for long

Losing track of the conversation
Nonsense trailing off
Made-up words slipping into the breeze

Sweaty, clammy grip on my mind
Won't stop sliding
Slipping away

Perfect sharp silver
In my mind's eye
Swallowed by blackness or an unnamed fear

Unseen foes with bright eyes
Staring at me through the darkness
I am not afraid of the dark

The secrets the darkness holds
Would be enough to drive you mad.
I've seen them all.

"I am not insane." says one.
The other one giggles, lets her confidante in on a secret she'd never believe:
"I am."
I TRIED so hard to keep the stanzas three verses long.

So yeah. It's dark, emo, morbid, probably leaves you questioning my sanity.

But have fun with it!

Forever yours,
PBR :blackrose:
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:iconavery1994:
Avery1994 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Student General Artist
This is cool I like this a lot
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PrincessBlackRose Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011  Student Writer
thanks!
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Zorn777 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011
My dear girl one can not ask the question to which one already knows the answer you are as sane as i am however that then leaves you with another question just how sane do you think i am....? MWA HA HA HA!
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PrincessBlackRose Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Student Writer
:evillaugh:
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:iconzorn777:
Zorn777 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011
but trust me i am completley nuts
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:iconprincessblackrose:
PrincessBlackRose Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Student Writer
Of course. It's why I love you :heart:
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:iconzorn777:
Zorn777 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011
awww love u too hunni :heart:
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:iconprincessblackrose:
PrincessBlackRose Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Student Writer
:iconnuzzleplz:
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:iconzorn777:
Zorn777 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011
:iconsnuggleplz:
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:iconlonelyemogirl4evr:
lonelyemogirl4evr Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011
I see that you used my line.
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:iconprincessblackrose:
PrincessBlackRose Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Student Writer
I did indeed.


Wait, the darkness one or the insane one?
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:iconlonelyemogirl4evr:
lonelyemogirl4evr Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011
The darkness one.
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:iconprincessblackrose:
PrincessBlackRose Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Student Writer
Ah.
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:iconlonelyemogirl4evr:
lonelyemogirl4evr Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011
What was the insane one?
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:iconprincessblackrose:
PrincessBlackRose Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Student Writer
All the way on the bottom.
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:iconlonelyemogirl4evr:
lonelyemogirl4evr Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011
ehhhhh.....Now I gotta look it up...
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:iconprincessblackrose:
PrincessBlackRose Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Student Writer
:giggle:
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007Balel Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Student Writer
It is great!!
I like it...
I don't mind dark poems... they are actually my fave...
I really like the imagery you used in this one.
Well done :)
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:iconprincessblackrose:
PrincessBlackRose Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Student Writer
thanks so much!
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:icon007balel:
007Balel Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011  Student Writer
You're welcome :)
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:iconaymie-lou:
Aymie-lou Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011
This is awsome :)
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:iconprincessblackrose:
PrincessBlackRose Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011  Student Writer
thanks!
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:iconaymie-lou:
Aymie-lou Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2011
No Problem
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:iconthebonniescott:
thebonniescott Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011
:clap:

No, it's more like a "getting high" poem.

I'm only questioning your sobriety. XD
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:iconprincessblackrose:
PrincessBlackRose Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011  Student Writer
Wow. I totally didn't see that xD
I'm clean and sober, I swear.
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:iconthebonniescott:
thebonniescott Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011
I kid, I kid. :lol:
I really did enjoy it though!
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:iconprincessblackrose:
PrincessBlackRose Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011  Student Writer
:lol:
thanks!
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:iconthebonniescott:
thebonniescott Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011
No problem!
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