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You're my world...
                            Bloody, but beautiful.
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They're telling me it's beautiful
I believe them
But will I ever know
The world behind my wall...?


Written from the point of view of a mother seeing her child for the first time. Legit, it came to me in the middle of my French test
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:iconrushandruleit:
I like the idea, but I think you should let the read figure it out (it isn't that hard) rather than overexplaining it in the artist comments. Also, I'd rather see a lighter font for the word beautiful, to portray the delicate beauty. Especially a cursive font, which I think you can do with html.
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~PrincessBlackRose May 24, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks for the critique ^^
I'm not entirely happy with the font, so I think I'll play around with it and see if I can find something better. :)
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:iconlonelyemogirl4evr:
See don't you love Tokio Hotel? And I love your six word stories. :)
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~PrincessBlackRose Apr 17, 2011  Student Writer
Yes. And they loved the song. So maybe I'll play it for her later.
Why thank you :bow: lol
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:iconlonelyemogirl4evr:
Crazy hair man is adorakable!!! Your are quite welcome
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~PrincessBlackRose Apr 17, 2011  Student Writer
adorkable is my new favorite word =]
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:iconlonelyemogirl4evr:
What? Does squabble get no love?
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~PrincessBlackRose Apr 18, 2011  Student Writer
Squabble is on my list of favorite words =]
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:iconlonelyemogirl4evr:
It had better be xD
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~PrincessBlackRose Apr 19, 2011  Student Writer
Of course!
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